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Pillar
Contributed by
EddieDean
on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 02:04:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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For my Friends,
For my Family,
I am a Pillar,
A Pillar of Strength.
I must be strong,
So others may be weak.
I must stand stoic,
So others may weep.
But,
Who is my Pillar?
I don't have one.
I Stand Alone.
Strong,
Silent,
Caring,
Wise.
Alas,
I am merely a Man.
I too need someone,
Someone to help me.
Will you help me?
You merely turn away,
Thats fine with me.
I will be here for you,
Even if you won't be
Here for me.
Someone must be that Pillar,
That someone is Me.
I did not ask for this task,
It was given to me.
In this task I stand Alone,
In this life I am Alone.
Helping others back Up,
When they fall Down.
Cold,
Solid,
Tall,
I Stand
Forever Vigilant.
My heart yearns,
Yearns for another.
Another's touch,
Another's love,
Another's life.
But no one comes to me,
So Alone I carry my burden.
Who will help me?
Standing my post,
I wait.
Hollow,
Alone,
Scared,
Stone.
My Heart hardens,
My Soul goes cold.
Life leaves me,
Soon I cease to be.
Forever in stone,
I am a Pillar.
A Pillar for the World.
Copyright ©
EddieDean
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2006-05-01 14:04:38]
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Re: Pillar
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 04:16:32 PM AEST
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Man...can I identify with this!!! It seems you have been reading my mind and you don't even know me!! A good write.
Welcome to YPDC- the site that cares....(well the members do)
Jenni
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Re: Pillar
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by kaitee on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 04:36:40 PM AEST
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wow..........
~Kaitee |
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Re: Pillar
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 04:54:34 PM AEST
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~*EddieDean*~
A big warm welcome to YPDC. I do hope u enjoy it here.
A very good first submission. I sense the sadness and longing for that special someone to come into ur life. You are always there for others, but who is there for u. Sadly I can so much relate to ur write.
A very well penned piece of poetry. I hope to read some more work from u. All the best of wishes.
*warm hugs*
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Pillar
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by EddieDean on
Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 10:31:38 PM AEST
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| Thank you all for your kind words, this poem came from my soul. It is me, the real me, and I believe that one day I will find that someone for me. But until that day, all I can do is just wait, pray and write. I'll post more when and where I can. |
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Re: Pillar
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by PoeticHybrid on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 07:12:57 AM AEST
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| Nice write man, nice write. |
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Re: Pillar
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 06:01:50 AM AEST
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Very powerfull masterpeice here!
I know what cha mean.
The world needs mucho guys like u.
huggs, big smiles,
emy |
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