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A Recurring Dream
Contributed by
The_Phantom
on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 01:36:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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I have a recurring dream, the type that even scares me,
I awake on a cold table, an IV in both arms, I atempt to move but I'm unable,
My blood flows through one, as embalming fluid flows through the other,
The doctor looks right at me, I try and speak, but he doesn't want to be bothered,
I scream as the veins tighten, he asks are you fightened,
I can feel my organs shutting down, I open my mouth but make no sound,
I awake on a table to a sharp pain in the chest, I find it hard to inhale a single breath,
The doctor has a saw and he begins to open me up, I'm horrified watching him cut,
I can feel the sting of air tickling my lungs, the look in his face tells me he's having fun,
My life blood is now all over the room, lights begin to fade, the end is soon,
I awake to my body being cold, I'm naked and my chest has been sown,
Ice has form over my eyes,, it takes everything I got to open them wide,
It's dark, the only sound I hear is a dying heart,
I atempt to move but my skin is stuck, I feel my flesh begin to rip as I try and adjust,
I awake in a box, it's cool and damp, I feel a terrible pain as my legs begin to cramp,
My body starts to stiffen, rigamortis is here but I'm still living,
Thud is the sound as dirt comes falling down,
I claw at the roof, fingers bleed as I break through,
I cry for help, and the people stare, am I invisible, do any of you care,
With blank looks they slowly leave, I awake, thank God it's just a dream.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
Copyright ©
The_Phantom
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2006-05-01 13:36:36]
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Re: A Recurring Dream
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 02:09:20 PM AEST
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How nice to hear from you again Phantom,
and thank you ever so much for your nice comment!
This dream scared me to death
As I read I held my breath.........
Then before I knew it, my eyes gave me a fit!
Ever Faithful Phantom you be
I've always loved your poems, even if I couldn't see!
Hope you don't have these dreams often
You're poor little wife will put you out to sea!
Warm love
LovingCritters
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Re: A Recurring Dream
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by shelby on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 03:08:40 PM AEST
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I sure miss you when your away.
Now for the poem, this scared me! Wheww your detailed accounts is incredible. You took me right into your dream with you.
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Re: A Recurring Dream
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 10:27:02 AM AEST
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This was a great write.. I liked everything about it.. I liked this alot..
take care
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