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Thoughts Of You
Contributed by
wizard
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Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 11:58:42 PM in AEST
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A voice as sweet as the robin’s song
The tune for which I’ve yearned so long
A gait as smooth as the summer winds
Loneliness your dancing step rescinds
Eyes shine like crystal spheres
A sparkling gaze and love appears
Yielding lips quick to coerce
Into a kiss as pure as natures verse
And your docile touch of gold
It’s morphing stroke a wonder to behold
Breath as pure as an angel’s sigh
The breath of which I so rely
Copyright ©
wizard
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2006-04-30 23:58:42]
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Re: Thoughts Of You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 05:47:22 AM AEST
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Omigosh Paul. How positively romantic in every way! You have
such a talent for expressing this. Very soft and gentle this piece.
So imenesly delicate and fragile, that when read, the words come
out almost as a whisper. I am left breathless by this stunning display
and beautiful word choices. A few quick thoughts? Wow.
I am impressed. This is gorgeous!
~Breezy
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Re: Thoughts Of You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 08:55:44 AM AEST
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You old smoooothy you!
I could quite fancy ya myself!
(In a purely heterosexual non gay way of course)
Excellent poetry.
J. |
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Re: Thoughts Of You
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by Shmokin on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 12:00:36 PM AEST
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| Beautifully romantic, without being sickly, gentle flow, nice rythm, well done :-) |
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Re: Thoughts Of You
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 07:16:47 PM AEST
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Paul~
An outstanding and well delivered write.
Your beautifully penned words are like a soft whisper in the wind. One gets such a tranquil feeling after reading ur remarkable poetry. You are a fine poet ~*Wiz*~ Keep up the magnificient work.
*warm hugs*
~*dreamer*~ |
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Re: Thoughts Of You
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by redtears on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 09:02:13 PM AEST
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| awwww, i love it, it's so lovely! |
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Re: Thoughts Of You
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 11:04:46 AM AEST
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what a beautiful work bro..I'm only sorry to have come to it so late-
I usually do to the better things in life.. lol
it's awesome!
Truly-
B |
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Re: Thoughts Of You
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 04:29:47 PM AEST
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I so love your quick thoughts. Heavenly beautiful... You have so much love in your soul, and you share it deeply with all of us Paul. I thank you for this poem.
Hugs,
RaquelLeah DuPont |
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Re: Thoughts Of You
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by Lilly-Quill on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 09:59:10 PM AEST
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| Wow~, this compares with the beauty of Nature and her magnificent arty scenes in motion. What a masterful masterpiece, Wizard~. |
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Re: Thoughts Of You
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by jyssvw22 on
Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 11:10:09 AM AEST
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Impressive for sure…this was tender with all the right touches
Nice as always
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