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QUESTIONS
Contributed by
BEE
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Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 11:10:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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QUESTIONs
Can i be your man
Will you let me come through
Stright through your mind
You are beautiful
And i wanna show you what i got
ANd what i can show you
Im your one and we know that
But will you let me be that one
My heart beats hard
At the feel of each breath
You are amazing
With these eyes i have
I see us living forever
ANd never leaving
Its all becouse of you
That i have found this feeling
Now can we make this real
And have it truthfuly come true
You are my everything
And i just wanna say
I like you to much to leave
So can i have a answer
A yes or no
Soo we can live forever
BY BRANDEN GOODRICH
Copyright ©
BEE
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2006-04-30 23:10:30]
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Re: QUESTIONS
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by Kimberlynn on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 07:42:22 PM AEST
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| Thats so sweet!!! |
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Re: QUESTIONS
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by redtears on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 09:09:10 PM AEST
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| awww, this poem is really nice and lovely! |
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Re: QUESTIONS
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by 03614 on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 06:24:18 AM AEST
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You know, I've read some of your poems and i honestly hv 2 say, you're a great poet.
This poem really got to me cuz i've been in the exact situation with a guy and i had to say no. This poem is just sweet and lovely. Great work. |
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