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Hold Your Mind and Bend...It's not January

Contributed by Exodus on Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 10:29:33 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Understand that you never can comprehend
Hold your mind and bend
In hopes that you will send
Something different than the end
Hold your composure
Clutching utter exposure
As you sit and burn
You never really learn
Just to be fake
With all the roads we know you'll take

She was played into pawning
And there they sit yawning
At her existing lack of existence
Stuck in the mockery of her resistance
She will never change
They will make her change
It could have been simplistic
Instead it turned sadistic
Full of malitious intent
As her mind was held and bent

The virtual absence of surreal
As you squint into the sun and feel
Full of intent to pursue
Everything intended unto you
Setting the record straight
Inscribing naturality as your knees begin to quake
Worry about your posture
What makes you toss her
Into the fire just to watch her burn
I was watching too, I guess I'll never learn

It wasn't January
But then again we're glad 'cuz we
Sat inside in the warmth we always bask
You only pull the trigger like its a task
Goodbye, you will probably swallow your tongue
Do not concern yourself with this, its already done
You rubbed my face against the concrete
I fetched your slippers and didn't get a treat
You give me the shakes
Your head is full of snakes

I started something different
In a place without one serpent
It was not obviously intended
As our minds contended
Take it one day at a time
You will never be welcomed as mine
The parameters of your individual
So conveniently hypothetical
Prescribe yourself some poison
Before you hurt someone

Deaf ears on speechless mouths
Cracking open like a bat against your teeth
I guess it was the empty one
That promise that you said you need
You are so ridiculous
It makes me smile like a chump in the morning
Look out when the window
Is broken and you hit the concrete without warning
Just keep your composure

Copyright © Exodus ... [ 2006-04-30 22:29:33]
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Re: Hold Your Mind and Bend...It's not January (User Rating: 1 )
by Keilantra on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 07:04:52 PM AEST
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thre were so many lines in this poem that made it so completely wondeful to read adn its perfect, would not change a single thing in it. nice.

You rubbed my face against the concrete
I fetched your slippers and didn't get a treat
You give me the shakes
Your head is full of snakes

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