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The Closed Book
Contributed by
luckedout
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Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 01:38:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I cant read you today
Your like a book in the dark
With no light for the page
But Im open for you
Every word, clear as day
It says I like you so much
So do you feel that way?
Mysterious and vague your title remains
A foreign language
It may as well contain
Decipher your emotion
For me someday
Because Im illiterate to you
Just show me the way.
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luckedout
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2006-04-30 13:38:40]
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Re: The Closed Book
(User Rating: 1 )
by American_Beauty_in_dixie on
Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 04:45:47 PM AEST
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| I liked the imagery in the first few lines..good job. |
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Re: The Closed Book
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by MrPerfect on
Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 04:50:57 PM AEST
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| good i think everyone goes through that |
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