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MY FIRST LOVE
Contributed by
jgb
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Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 04:22:04 AM in AEST
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MY FIRST LOVE
Feelings push through
Sitting and contemplating.
Past, future, and present
So much time instigating
Not intentional but unpleasant
A life of much to do
It’s enough for you
Still what is it
Anger or bliss?
So much time has gone by.
Decisions were made.
Why?
Must you give up on your first love?
Must you stop writing for a life above?
Misunderstandings;
It has to be,
For my first love is God;
And writing is his gift to me.
Joanna G. Barber
3/31/2006 2:39 AM
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Re: MY FIRST LOVE
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 05:02:49 AM AEST
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Some time we come to such a point of our life; a cross road; where we wake up and wonder which way to go. Here my poet friend is standing in one such cross road and trying to evaluate within, what to choose. The inner conflict is beautifully portrayed by the poet in this work.
FRANCO
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Re: MY FIRST LOVE
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by emystar on
Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 05:47:12 AM AEST
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You are fortunate to have a husband. I've been mairried ****** times but never have I had a husband.
In this magnificent write it show's your prioritys are in order.
huggs,
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Re: MY FIRST LOVE
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 10:27:58 PM AEST
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Oh My JBG this was simply Loverly!
Thank you so much for sharing your feelings with us.
Roses at your feet dear...........this was truly magnificent!
Warm love
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Re: MY FIRST LOVE
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 02:38:30 AM AEST
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A beautiful murel of emotions entwined with
spiritual conviction. Most lovely.
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