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Become The Words
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 12:10:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I am wishing, hoping....
almost
too the point of the most intensive
yearning...
(stomach turned inside out)
to crawl deep inside
to get lost within
(but never forgotten)
These Words
to get lost
within
each
vowel,
consonant,
each digraphic word.....
(escapism)
to have me
Become The Words
Magically
Artistically
to flow
to paper
(fluidity)
To Become The Words
to take my pain
my fears
so far away
from here
To Become The Words
that cannot
be spoken
Not even on the deafest ears
To Become The Words
of terror
injustice
love
peace
in this gnarled old life
I've lived forever
in
all
these
words.
April, 2006
Laura Horner
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Re: Become The Words
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 12:40:16 AM AEST
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Aw, Laurabeam, so sad but with hope intertwined. A phenomenal poem.
I love it.
Love ya' sis,
*huge hug*
Timotheus
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Re: Become The Words
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by zelator on
Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 12:58:09 AM AEST
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| excellent...alot of not very good stuff on this site, but i really get this... |
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by girish on
Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 01:45:02 AM AEST
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READ MY POEM ON "WORDS"TITLED THE SAME.
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Re: Become The Words
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 09:34:05 AM AEST
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omigoodness... boy, does this make sense to me! I think I know this sort of 'moment' (I've tried to capture it myself along the way). There is... well... there is much in a moment like that and it can feel, I think, near impossible to capture it all. It's a bit like trying to lasso the sky in the middle of a terrific storm. Ah, but you did well here!!! This speaks to me so clearly and it, yes!, does communicate the moment.
I really like this, Laura... I found an echo of myself in the middle of it, you know? And hon? The moment will pass. In the interim, close you eyes and take a deep breath whenever you need to - and - keep doing this. : )
~Snemmy
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 04:09:02 PM AEST
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awww such a sad write hugs
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Re: Become The Words
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 09:33:39 PM AEST
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| you keep making this site worth coming to laura, excellent poem. |
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Re: Become The Words
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 07:56:46 PM AEST
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It's been a while laura, but i'm not dissapointed. This indeed has a really melancholic, blank feel about it, something that is reinforced by the style in which it is written. Can't wait for more,
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Re: Become The Words
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 08:04:34 PM AEST
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I love the imagery of crawling into your own words and the escapism sounds like a great trip.
If I could crawl into words to take my anguish away i'd be one of those great stories in a..err porno mag!
Seriously great work Doris, and I don't say it lightly when I say...
I can relate to this piece.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 09:00:17 PM AEST
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Laura, I am stunned and amazed at this incredibly deep
write. Wonderful work here, hun.Wonderfully thought
provoking.
"To Become The Words
that cannot
be spoken"
Gosh, I love that. SO much. Brilliant write. I love it entirely!
~Breezy
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Re: Become The Words
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 03:48:42 PM AEST
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I love what Jen said, and I have to agree, you are one of the poets that make this site worthwhile, Laura.
*hugs you tight, tight, tight*
I love this, I can relate to it too, you know. I think has something to do with us being poets ;)
Wonderful write, my friend. I just wish it wasn't so sad.
Stay strong, hun.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 11:14:29 AM AEST
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Laura my sister and dear friend as always u r the epiteme of artul ways and expresessions, a most joyful and pleasureable read. peace2u my sister.
Ben |
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Re: Become The Words
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by Willofree on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 01:34:19 PM AEST
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Ah Laura,
You are very good with words, and very descriptive words that seem to denote a lot of pain and agony. Yet interspersed are more positive words woven in very creatively. Yet, I think our soul would seek a manner of expression that would transcend word; and that's where reading between the lines comes in, the subliminal message. A message of a tender loving soul and acceptance.
Peace Laura, well done
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 02:35:48 PM AEST
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You, yourself have caught a moment here that many a poet strives to attain, to become the words, the poem, the moment.
Bravo!! |
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by ek_da_poet on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 11:58:43 PM AEST
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| im so sorry life is tough for you, but hang in there maybe you can get some therapy help |
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Re: Become The Words
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 11:53:55 AM AEST
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BRAVO~!BRAVO!BRAVO! Laura, what a masterpiece you have created here, and to have the talent to make your reader feel what you were feeling...........Superb!!! Just Superb!!! I felt like the words, the vowels and ink from your pen flowing onto the paper....Your uniqueness and originality is marvelous!
Enjoy all of your work, but this was wonderfully written, and hit the mark!
Reminded me of "I Am Music!" Remember that one?
Warm love
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 03:16:37 PM AEST
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| wonderful. That's all I can say. |
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 01:23:53 AM AEST
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Great writing, my friend.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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by Archie on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 10:41:24 AM AEST
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| I know how you feel but that is why we write to escape and challenge ourselves to perservere. |
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 08:43:22 PM AEST
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Your shelter is between the lines of the heart in this one, screaming in turmoil from the depths of your soul, a curious feeling one gets from this write. A fine peice of work indeed, says alot between the lines.
peace 2u my sister Laura
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 12:07:13 PM AEST
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Laura; this is hands-down my absolute favourite write by you!!! There is a beautiful sorrow to this piece that makes it so incredibly moving, (and I have no doubt...) stirred every poets' heart; deep within, when they stumbled across this most impressive poem. Very well done!
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 12:02:49 AM AEST
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Laura~
Forgive me my friend for it has been way too long since I last ventured ur pages.
A most impressive thought provoking piece of poetry filled with so much depth and emotion. Hang tuff dear friend. It shall soon pass. I hope that all is well with u. Keep penning it helps heal the wounds.
huge hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 09:45:08 PM AEST
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it's absolutely clear that you'd, never a thought, beyond the scope of words..or beauty.. composition as well.
Billy
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by wizard on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 01:57:29 AM AEST
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awesome write, laura!
i love it!
wiz |
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by JGB on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 02:58:57 AM AEST
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| Gripping! |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 03:59:20 PM AEST
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Fantastic write, masterfully done, laura.
wabl
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 02:42:55 PM AEST
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very strong writing, and so demanding of a reader's
attention as to" Become the words" as you put it.
It's wonderfully written!
dw |
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Re: Become The Words
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 09:57:48 PM AEST
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Laura, a powerful poem regarding the pain and remorse in your life. Even the way you structure the poem, in a liniar column adds to the narrowed focus of discontentness in your life. I've noticed other writes with a similar style. Perhaps that's a symbol for a focus on the pain in your life. It saddens me to see you struggle so, yet I admire and respect you so much for your courage and tenacity.
Bless you my friend
Will |
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 04:08:35 PM AEST
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Oh My Laura this is so clever.........your format is intriquing indeed!
Wouldn't it been fun if we could do as you related here? Just to become the words and not have to live them.........how grand!
Lovely dear
Always enjoy your very creative work.
Warm love
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by jyssvw22 on
Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 11:01:43 AM AEST
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Truly a powerful write, with depth, as it offers something important to consider.
Great write
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Re: Become The Words
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 01:38:32 PM AEST
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Thos was killer as well, I loved it. It's obvious you're the best poet on here. I'm proud to know you.
*Beems with glee* |
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 07:08:29 AM AEST
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yup.
love n' hugs nessa
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Re: Become The Words
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by johnnywords on
Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 03:48:50 PM AEST
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| Well crafted and quite thought provoking. I suspect you have many other works as well. |
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