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Katie
Contributed by
big_B
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Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 10:10:31 PM in AEST
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She waits for me at the window everyday
When I step in, she crowds me with love
She does not like to be ignored
So she waits at my bed
Waiting for the love she seeks,
She is so patient
When its time for me to go to bed
She is all over me
The way she arches her back as I rub her
The way she gracefully
Moves around the bed
Oh, she is also my cat
What did you think
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2006-04-29 22:10:31]
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Re: Katie
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 10:33:36 PM AEST
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I only read this because the title caught my attention.. (my DAGHTERS name is katie).. lol
and so I've mixed feelings..
but after careful consideration..
I STILL have mixed feelings..
good write -
B |
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Re: Katie
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by edwynne on
Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 09:04:42 PM AEST
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| nice idea... u could end it better tho.. 'oh, she is also my cat' doesn't really work for me..the rest is sweet tho ; } |
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