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Think again
Contributed by
kolbrun
on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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a year ago you said good-bye
leaving me hurt and crying
you didn´t want to tell me why
inside I felt I was dying
till I heard from your brother
what between us went wrong
but that I didn´t have to bother
cause be then the problem was gone
the miracle of life you had inside
a miracle created by us two
but all you did was completely hide
it didn´t mean anything to you
our child you had taken away
you never talked about it to me
I didn´t have anything to say
because you knew I would never agree
now you want to come back
saying you screwed up back then
you should have known how I´d react
all I can say is "yeah right, think again"
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kolbrun
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2003-02-04 10:30:00]
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Re: Think again
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 04:47:30 PM AEST
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| i love this poem... |
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Re: Think again
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 05:18:17 PM AEST
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| awwww... a sad beautiful heartfelt write..lovely... |
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Re: Think again
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by Ronald on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 08:11:09 PM AEST
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| Sad write but good poem indeed. |
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Re: Think again
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by venkat on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 06:25:23 AM AEST
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| Sad .. very sad.. venkat |
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Re: Think again
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by riverofwords on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 05:34:20 AM AEST
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excellent excellent poem
sad but with real feeling
an awesome write
peace be your journey
terry |
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Re: Think again
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 01:09:47 PM AEST
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Kolbrun, What a terrible thing to have happen
I think I would have reacted the same
.See how your words have drawn me into your world. I felt as though I was there. |
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