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The Wonders of Winter
Contributed by
penguindave
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Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 02:43:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Bleached my world, gone sombre shades,
A cleanliness it now invades,
It coats my trees in leaves of ice,
Houses dressed in crests of white,
Fleetingly a Robin's blush,
Flashes by unto a bush
Below a flaxen Holly tent,
Feasting on its berries spent,
Indentations, footsteps break,
I leave behind upon my wake,
Mar a weave of angel dust,
Too vanish in a winters rush,
Spading white from windowsill,
It freezes hands in winters chill,
Plying snow inside my hand,
I cherish Winter wonderland,
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Re: The Wonders of Winter
(User Rating: 1 ) by ButchHoward on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 09:22:10 PM AEST (User
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Good imagery and rythm -I felt the cold and saw the "robin flash" and "the houses dressed in crests of white." I remember the sensation of "spading white from windowsills" -the feel of snow in my hand. Nicely written recollection of Winter wonders.
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