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BREAKING OUT
Contributed by
lillyjane
on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 02:10:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You took away my hopes, you stole all my dreams,
sent away my friends, killed my self esteem.
you took my motification, you achieved your goal,
you stole my inspiration. the essence of my soul,
One day I had the courage, mustered up the strength
I broke out of your chains, and pulled down the fence,
I stepped into the world, on my face felt the sun,
at last it was all over, my new life had begun.
Copyright ©
lillyjane
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2006-04-29 02:10:31]
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Re: BREAKING OUT
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 03:28:47 AM AEST
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| Oh no another one oh well try again. |
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Re: BREAKING OUT
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by Manda2 on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 03:16:48 PM AEST
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| Go for it girl!! A great write lillyjane, glad you have broken out! |
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Re: BREAKING OUT
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by maestar on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 09:46:06 AM AEST
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| to right an all, Dont let anyone make you think your not in control you own your life. glad you feel this way. great write. |
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