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Time To Quit
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 10:06:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Church bell chimes
Mark the eleventh hour And IIn modest shelter
Beneath motel stairs
Avoid the rain
To light the nightThe ruddy glow
And smoke denote
The passage of minutes And I
WonderHow many hours now
have I given them
Perhaps it is timeTo quit
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Copyright ©
Nazmythian
... [
2006-04-28 22:06:12]
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Re: Time To Quit
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 10:34:22 PM AEST
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Interesting write, Snazzy! Fleeting they are, these moments
of clarity, no? It could be a hushed whisper or a deafening
SCREAM!! but they very distinctly call to us, for sure.
A multitude of different things could this be applied to.
I'm sure it touches and/or moves many people in
very diverse and unique ways.
Thought provoking write, hun. And as always, done
with that 'snazzy' kinda flare. Excellent work.
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Re: Time To Quit
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 11:03:03 AM AEST
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I am mesmerized by the abstract subject of this poem, and will be looking for meaning in further reads of both this and your forth coming work. I loved the set up and can call this nothing short of thought provoking.
A Great Job!
SCM |
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Re: Time To Quit
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by ButchHoward on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 10:08:49 PM AEST
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This poem is, to me, about quitting smoking. I'm wondering how many hours I have given . Unique form -good write!
Butch |
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Re: Time To Quit
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by candysears on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 08:15:48 PM AEST
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I love your writes..Talented have found its home with you...
I have read many of your poems..
They all are great and in a class of its own...
God Bless! |
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Re: Time To Quit
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 05:00:57 PM AEST
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A really unique presentation, Naz, of an untold "given" that leaves us readers interpreting from our own ezperiences the moment you've captured. And ya made this ol' cowboy really happy 'cause we like those "wide open spaces!" Loved it.
wabl
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Re: Time To Quit
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by Willofree on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 04:31:53 PM AEST
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Naz,
Such a uniquely structured write, again so creative. The structrue really adds to the reflective atmosphere of the poem. I hope, however, that the poem does not reflect any consideration to quiting writing......I certainly hope not...
Well done my friend,
Will/Terry |
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