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The lines say it all
Contributed by
brew
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Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 09:34:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Cold drops of rain fallen on the face
Feeling of loss
Then a shadow appears and the cold is gone
A feeling of warmth takes over
Takes something old out and puts in new
A inner somber peace
Can it be the words that are truly felt
Spoken with a whisper in the mind
It indeed is felt when seen
Not a dream yet a sense of reality
Holds all that keeps the warmth
Always given back
Copyright ©
brew
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2006-04-28 21:34:46]
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Re: The lines say it all
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 10:47:43 PM AEST
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Dayna girl ~
You've yet again accomplished to take words and throw
them effortlessly down in an attempt to convey a truely
profound thought. Your writes never fail to make the reader
regard and contemplate and this one is no exception.
Painfully thought-provoking !!
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: The lines say it all
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by emystar on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 02:45:47 AM AEST
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Very positive write and we need mucho more of these.
Very good.
huggs,
emy
If more people would write like this our planet would be a better place. |
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Re: The lines say it all
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by emystar on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 02:46:13 AM AEST
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Very positive write and we need mucho more of these.
Very good.
huggs,
emy
If more people would write like this our planet would be a better place. |
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Re: The lines say it all
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 08:51:13 PM AEST
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Wow, such sentiment!
Much clapping for this one!!!! |
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Re: The lines say it all
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by Spike on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 05:01:22 AM AEST
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I really liked this one - a very yin-yang feel. Internal dispositions always right themselves eventually, whether you are an optimist or a pessimist. Nice poem.
Spike |
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Re: The lines say it all
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 04:42:40 PM AEST
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How fun it would be to just pick at your thoughts Dayna! Miss-thoughts-of-the-profound-and-deep-inspiration! This is a wonderful piece.
~Scorp. |
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