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Indifference
Contributed by
Arwen
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Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Cloud my every step.
Form my barrier...shuts out all feelings.
Breakdown all attachment. Go away.
Leave me be.
I once believed...but no more.
I fèél sorry for the next one that tries.
I walk dry barren lands now...
No-one will find me here.
Indifferent to love, hope, that scary fèéling
Running through my veins when I sèé him.
Hate will follow yes...but I'll only make them
Stronger...
And Strike with clarity that i want no part of
this thing called a relationship, this supposed mutual bond...
Friendship is fine and welcome
But I will walk away
If anything more approaches.
I don't want it.
Go away.
Leave me in this cold, lonely plain.
Hurt is more tolerable here.
My heart's heavier yes...but ultimately better off.
And so I live through every day as it comes.
Strong and resilient,
Don't nèéd anyone.
Go invade someone else whose willing
To put up with this nonsense.
Stalk someone else.
Leave me be.
Go away...
Copyright ©
Arwen
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2003-02-04 09:00:00]
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Re: Indifference
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by Sexygirl on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 09:13:16 AM AEST
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| I am sorry to see that your feeling so much pain.....not everyone is like that believe me.....Your words are so expressive ....you have a real talent to write...don't give up.... |
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Re: Indifference
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by MrWrite on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 10:59:52 AM AEST
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| I haven't seen talent like this in a long time. Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Peace. |
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Re: Indifference
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 12:06:56 PM AEST
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| an excellent creative write, my best to you and a hug* |
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Re: Indifference
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 04:44:06 PM AEST
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| this is so good...so good... |
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Re: Indifference
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by Misha on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 08:36:45 PM AEST
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| aren't we better off alone? no one to destroy us!!! |
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Re: Indifference
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by Saira on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 06:16:18 PM AEST
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Good and very powerful write! Keep them coming.
Saira |
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