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My Days
Contributed by
ravendominique
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Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 08:20:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm barely alive
My soul is dead
I wake up full of dread
I want to escape
Just runaway
to much to live for
is what people say
If they only knew
The pain and fear
They would understand
Each day and every tear
Now I'm dead Life's finally won
A blast to the head
with my best friends gun
At my funeral
Coffin goes into the grave
Goodbye to the girl
everyone tried to save
Copyright ©
ravendominique
... [
2006-04-28 20:20:46]
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Re: My Days
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 08:47:31 PM AEST
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This poem really touched me. It was like reading some of my past feelings on paper. Great job and keep it up.
-Jen |
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Re: My Days
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by Lilbabe on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 10:18:49 PM AEST
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i can feel the pain coming through in this poem...good job! i relate to topics like this well. i loved it.
~lexy~ |
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Re: My Days
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by Lilbabe on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 10:18:55 PM AEST
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i can feel the pain coming through in this poem...good job! i relate to topics like this well. i loved it.
~lexy~ |
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