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~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
Contributed by
eternal_dreamer
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Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 10:14:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
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~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
Everyday and every night
As the sands of time slip on by
Of every hour and passing minute
Thoughts of you make me sigh
A colourful rainbow’s on display
After a few springtime showers
The air is suddenly filled with
Aroma from beautiful flowers
I fall into a lovely daydream
Where visions of you are cast
The deepest desires of my heart
Come flowing in so strong and fast
We meet in the lush green meadow
Underneath the sky so bright and blue
You serenade my wistful heart
To make long sweet love to you
We lay amidst blooming asters
Blue Bells and daisies too
You hand me a forget-me-not
A token of love so true
The subtle wind gently blows
My daydream begins to fade
I awake to find the bright sky
Darkened by the clouds shade
Here I stand alone once again
With loving thoughts of you
Until time is kind enough
To see my dream come true…
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Re: ~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
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by bigduck6769 on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 10:18:17 AM AEST
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there is some amazing imagery in this poem..
really good write
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Re: ~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 10:32:43 AM AEST
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You painted some wonderful images in this piece.
I felt like I was right there in the meadow.........but then..........three's a crowd isnt it ?
Thx for sharing
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Re: ~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 11:01:23 AM AEST
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a dreamy write Sue, flowing and delicate. You are a blossom to me my friend.
huggers from the desert
Michelle |
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Re: ~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 11:29:52 PM AEST
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Susie Q~
Soft, gentle and so beautiful this write was. [I believe it to be a dream shared by many too]
I love how you took a thought and wove your words so cleverly and sweetly around it until
a truly remarkable piece was born of it. Amazing write Susie. Full of love, warmth
and burning passion. Incredible imagery. I envisioned this with very little effort thanks to
your wonderful way with words.
Loving and sweet.
~Breezy |
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Re: ~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 12:38:37 PM AEST
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Sue,
An enchanting delicate write full of such beauty! I think if your friend does not like it (he/she) is out of their minds. You have captured the heart here and used amazing discriptivness. You have also managed to use one of my most favorite words (lush) that words makes me feel full, child-like, and beautiful.
Well done Sue, as always!
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Re: ~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 06:22:31 PM AEST
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Dearest Sue..
I apologize for coming, so late to this-
(as I usually do the better things in my life)
...and as I read this now.. any penned reaction
would be ill concieved-
Many should be so lucky to have know you luv~
..as I have.
Eternally..
B |
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Re: ~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 01:10:06 AM AEST
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Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh how sweet, how romantic, how realistic in your heart.........and how I pray that someday soon it will come true for sure!
Warm love
momconsue |
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Re: ~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 01:26:04 PM AEST
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This is a very beautiful poem and the imagery is awesome. I hope it will come true.
Take care.
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Re: ~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
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by wizard on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 07:24:07 PM AEST
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wow...must be some friend!!
i like this a lot...it is perfectly done and so full of desire.
nice job,
wiz |
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Re: ~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 08:13:59 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write sue ,but all your poems are like you wonderful,,hugs and kisses u me,,,now come talk to me ,,,,,Eddy |
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Re: ~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 10:12:16 PM AEST
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It came true, lovely poem...
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Re: ~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
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by Lilly-Quill on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 02:28:33 AM AEST
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Yes, yes, who doesn't love a rhythmic, rhyming, romantic daydream so lush with love's desire and rich with oceanic imagery. Your, dear Susie Q, is a wondrous muse for sure; and what a pleasure to enjoy.
A masterful masterpiece, in the field of daydreams and nature's scenes!
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Re: ~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
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by Lo2681 on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 12:20:18 AM AEST
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Beautifully put. I love your uses of words. It painted a beautiful picture for me:)
~Lo |
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Re: ~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
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by moses on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 03:56:58 PM AEST
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I daydream all the time. Again a wonderful piece of work, like everyone else has said, very striking imagery!
The subtle wind gently blows
My daydream begins to fade
I awake to find the bright sky
Darkened by the clouds shade
Really like that stanza.
-moses |
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Re: ~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 11:07:37 PM AEST
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Well I've been a way for a while but I should
be back on for a more regular basis now and
I must say this was a beautifully written poem
I loved the imagery and rhyme scheme and
how it flowed. Beautiful writing Sue its a
pleasure to readyou again!
Hugs,
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Re: ~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
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by Spike on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 06:20:37 AM AEST
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Lush and colourful in both subject matter and description -so easy to fall into the imagery!
Spike |
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Re: ~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 11:17:47 PM AEST
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Sounds a tad more than a dear friend. ;-)
Very beautiful metaphors and writing.
I love reading love poems and I certainly enjoyed this one.
Thank you, Susie Q From Across the Blue.
Tim
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Re: ~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 09:12:31 PM AEST
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This is beautiful and says what the heart needs 2 be saying 4 some one like u. It is real and gracefuly you in all it's innocence
and honesty of a true artitst and genuine
poet. beautifuly done.
((((Sue))))
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Re: ~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 07:17:20 AM AEST
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AAAAAH! I hate it when loads of people have commented before me, cause they've all said what I wanted to say, now I can't say it cause they said it first.
Confused???
Cause I am!
What I mean to say is this is a fantastic read with great imagery.
J |
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Re: ~*The Desire Of My Heart*~
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 11:19:58 PM AEST
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Sigh...a soft and wistful write... wonderfully done...
Jenni |
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