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A FORBIDDEN QUEST
Contributed by
FRANCO
on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 09:16:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Bobbling cozy youthful blood
eager to know the forbidden
properties of life, in hast he mingled
with concurring little street brats
to stray around like a pack of wolves
hunted to quench their lusty thirst
of their mortal flesh,
bothered not for consequences,
heed not to “His Command”
feasted over a maid until joy cried for help.
course of time spared none, marked
him with A.I.D.S, left him without any aid.
Deeds so immortal head starts
with overwhelming bliss end in awful misery;
whimpered till the last journey in vain
- to conclude life in pain.
-END-
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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2006-04-28 09:16:08]
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Re: A FORBIDDEN QUEST
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 10:23:15 AM AEST
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so powerful and bitterly sad at the end, truth to our world now. Nicely done
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Re: A FORBIDDEN QUEST
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 11:46:06 AM AEST
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Cowboys don't much take t' "the forbidden" but (and this may destroy m' cowboy) this cowboy, though monogomously heterosexual, be a lighthearted "honorary member" of an internationally blended Zuni Mountain Sanctuary, a Fairie retreat near where I live. Some of the finest, most intelligent humans being I've met in life. Lost some good and close friends to AIDS. FRANCO, deep readers will appreciate the depth of this mighty fine poem. PM ya later.
KenMoore
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Re: A FORBIDDEN QUEST
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by Penguindave on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 12:18:50 PM AEST
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| A powerful poem with real depth, enjoyed it very much though sad. excellent |
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Re: A FORBIDDEN QUEST
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 12:04:54 PM AEST
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This is indeed very powerful and so very sad.
Of course there are human weaknesses that by far outweigh the weakness of the flesh.
Oscar Wilde, p;roduced his best after he was impriseoned on account of above weakness, was broken- and really became what he was as a result of his weakness.
The Lord works in mysterious ways.
Great poem.
Splendid!
Elizabeth |
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Re: A FORBIDDEN QUEST
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by Aquarius01 on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 01:00:51 PM AEST
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| A most powerfull yet ,sad write, it's reality as we know it today. You've penned this happening very well...Gloria E. |
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