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You are Beautiful
Contributed by
packatack
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Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 03:26:42 AM in AEST
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I seen you before I''m tryin to remember where
That glimpse of your tears dropping on floor oh dear
A sad looking girl hoping life was much more fair
Sometimes beauty is seen thru tears of despair
Don''t u worry girl you are pretty please end your tears
I saw you again but I was busy to make an affair
Maybe later on in the day I''ll see you again
Shining hair your hairdresser must do care
I did not see wat was behind those tears
But eyes like a crystal a jewelers top care
Maybe thats how they look but when can I peer
Now I see what a wonderful dear you are
Damn girl life seems endless in your care
You are beautiful I can''t stop tellin you
My heart inside feels full of life from you
Again now I do not know wat I''d do without seein u
But looking at those eyes makes my heart fall in love
With a beautiful girl that I want to adore
Baby oh baby you are what u are
And I''m gonna tell ya that till our lives end somewhere
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packatack
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Re: You are Beautiful
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by emystar on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 03:41:58 AM AEST
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heavenly beautifull and someone is so very fortunate to have you.
huggs,
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Re: You are Beautiful
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 05:23:46 AM AEST
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| beautifully written , nice job |
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Re: You are Beautiful
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by kaitee on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 10:26:53 AM AEST
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what a sweet poem
~Kaitee |
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Re: You are Beautiful
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by joydeep_nath on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 10:37:00 AM AEST
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| wow m,an beautifully written...so simple yet so moving..n so layered...weel done |
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Re: You are Beautiful
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by k2kdesigner on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 01:51:03 PM AEST
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| Very emotional poem--I wish I could read a poem like this that was written about me, she's very lucky. |
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Re: You are Beautiful
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 05:18:18 PM AEST
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wow pack.. this is really cool stuff.. do not make time, take time and find her again.. you have a deep love inside of you, do not waste it..
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Re: You are Beautiful
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by desireemiote on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 07:37:40 AM AEST
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Eyes are the window to the soul. Though I am not fortunate enough to have fallen in love with such a poet as yourself, the words are there in his eyes. Whomever she may be do not let her go without reading this poem.
Megan(and her bun in the oven) |
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