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visit in dark
Contributed by
welch12
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Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 01:41:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A scar develops no visable wound set deep a hole so black.
Hatred for a childhood home yet loving as it was.
Unwanted now ,or so it seams, a burden on ones life.
Not bitter though cos' other weights deflect a fleeting visit.
No blame is laid by me ,for dark is the path ahead,
and quater century time to leave, and feel release inside.
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welch12
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2006-04-28 01:41:29]
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Re: visit in dark
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by Penguindave on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 04:12:19 AM AEST
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What a very deep and honest write! it must have been a difficult subject to portray in words. I too have suffered in childhood and the scares always remain, but life goes on.
A very deep and moving write thankyou for keeping it real. |
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Re: visit in dark
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by FRANCO on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 05:00:26 AM AEST
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When fear enters inside a tender heart it remains forever like a permanent scare. The words were beautifully complied, though short, but yet conveys the notion of the poet very clearly.
FRANCO
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Re: visit in dark
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by gribbs on
Sunday, 18th November 2007 @ 04:03:32 AM AEST
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| somtimes the only way to go forward in this life, is to never look back...as hard as it may be...good write... |
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