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The X's and O's
Contributed by
keilantra
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Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 08:46:15 PM in AEST
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Despite this misery and heartache
I prepare for you a smile
Break me in a thousand pieces
I'll still stay for a while
Read between my artificial smile
Tell me, do you know?
Can you read my secret message
Between the X's and O's?
Lies become constantly easier
As the weeks flow gently by
I'm just here to make you happy
(No youll never see me cry)
Shed a tear for you my love?
I believe that I would never
You're barely real to me at all,
You just use me as your lever.
You just focus on looking good
Leave me to do the rest
I'll work on making this look real
I'll keep this facade abreast.
It is mainly my pseudo-affection
That keeps you well aglow
But can you read the little message
Between the X's and the O's
Copyright ©
keilantra
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Re: The X's and O's
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by br0k3nandbl00dy on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 09:05:47 PM AEST
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Wow, thats amazing. I really can relate to that...
Good job. |
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Re: The X's and O's
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by redtears on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 09:18:11 PM AEST
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| man, i really liked it! |
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Re: The X's and O's
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 09:25:50 PM AEST
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I really loved these words:
"It is mainly my pseudo-affection
That keeps you well aglow
But can you read the little message
Between the X's and the O's"
awesome.. you go-
B
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Re: The X's and O's
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by xPixiexDustx on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 11:30:09 PM AEST
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| Amazing. I love it. Greeeaat job! =) |
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Re: The X's and O's
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by emystar on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 01:06:08 AM AEST
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Awesome writing.
Keep up the good work.
huggs,
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Re: The X's and O's
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 01:55:39 PM AEST
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My file of fav'rites gettin' fat
This poem be 'nother reason fer that.
You have so very tenderly proffered a gentle warning to one so pseudo-loved to read between the lines of x and o, the original of your union.
Ya just got a new fan.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: The X's and O's
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by brew on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 09:16:45 PM AEST
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Great messgae, and it makes you wonder how many can read between the x's and o's............I can say, not many.....Good post.!
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Re: The X's and O's
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 11:38:41 AM AEST
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A very gentle write yet so full of sadness. I do hope that one day you find nothing but true, passionate love between your Xs and Os. Until then keep feeling, for even feeling misery and pain is better than not feeling at all. When you feel the negative, the positive will be further accentuated. A great write again!
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Re: The X's and O's
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by wizard on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 04:39:24 PM AEST
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wow..i enjoyed reading this. its a nice change of pace, and it seems the this piece of drama may lead you to write several more poems on this topic. can't wait.
wiz |
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Re: The X's and O's
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by Millennium on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 07:19:16 PM AEST
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Re: The X's and O's
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by kttykttywfreckls on
Tuesday, 25th July 2006 @ 01:45:05 PM AEST
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| I can relate. Another good write.... |
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