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Why dont you love me
Contributed by
whatsername
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Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 07:27:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Why don’t you love me?
Why do you act so cold?
Must you turn you shoulder on me
When it’s your hand I want to hold?
This room is spinning round
The floor is growing near
My body is screaming on the inside
While my heart is begging you here
I need a warm embrace
My head is growing light
The coldness I am feeling now
Is breaking my everlasting might
Why do I need these emotions?
They are only breaking me down
I need some air in this enclosed room
The suffocation is provoking my frown
Insanity has struck my nerve
It wont let my forget your face
But all of this loneliness
Would be lost in your embrace
I beg you for some comfort
This desperation is too great
Please come to me in this dark hour
Before it becomes too late
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whatsername
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2006-04-27 19:27:48]
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Re: Why dont you love me
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by ham323 on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 08:14:16 PM AEST
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Wow.
I love this poem.
By far. Fantastic really. It just, really got me.
Good job, really. |
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Re: Why dont you love me
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by slogan on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 08:41:05 PM AEST
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| excellent write.. I enjoyed reading this poem...filled with such emotion and honestly...jh |
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Re: Why dont you love me
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by br0k3nandbl00dy on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 09:14:03 PM AEST
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| Beautiful. |
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Re: Why dont you love me
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by mazeof_darkness on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 01:20:35 AM AEST
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| i love it. great write. kinda sad. hope it works out. |
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Re: Why dont you love me
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by Packatack on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 02:22:17 AM AEST
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I can feel ur words of unnessary pain...thanks for sharing
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Re: Why dont you love me
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by Wronglyaccused on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2020 @ 07:49:24 AM AEST
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| Great poem I so feel this way right now! I’m longing for this but the one I love doesn’t care. |
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