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Naive Little Being
Contributed by
kaitee
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Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 03:22:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Naive little being
It's not what your seeing
That is only the first of the meaning
How can you say you understand what I'm feeling
When you don't even know how bad I'm dealing
It'll go away, It'll just pass
You say those things, but you don't even ask
Let me ask you this--
Have you ever been ******
Left the party and never been missed
Bypassed the exit time and again
Always one step behind in the end
Had an apointment but end up tardy
Being ignored at your own birthday
Saying goodbye to someone you love
Never knowing true love from above
I didn't think so, you got no clue
Hot it feels to be left in the dust by your crew
So don't be makin' too quick decisions
That **** won't fly down here like the pigeons
If only living life had instructions
Maybe It'd save me from my lifes destructions
I'm not some open book left all revealing
So how can you say you understand what I'm feeling
Only in my dreams could I make this life new
But someone told me dreams don't come true
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kaitee
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2006-04-27 15:22:21]
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Re: Naive Little Being
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by Aeicha on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 05:39:41 PM AEST
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Re: Naive Little Being
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by ek_da_poet on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 03:09:34 PM AEST
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Let me ask you this--
Have you ever been ******
Left the party and never been missed
sounds like u were raped or was it for money |
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Re: Naive Little Being
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by rapnificent on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 02:23:41 PM AEST
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Loved the poem. And it's very true that noone can know how another person eels or what they have to go through if they don't ever experience the same thing. It's easy to judge and hard to feel what one knows absolutely nothing about.
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