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Mine
Contributed by
jess_mac
on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 02:36:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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feeling the urge for your enveloping arms
with you, I'm myself; no need for charms
thinking of you since I crawled to a stance
leave you or succeed in life, I'd give up the chance
more than a feeling, my need for you innate
I resist you at times, but you always win the debate
sent fom above, you relax my head
you are my love, you are my bed
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2006-04-27 14:36:39]
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Re: Mine
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 02:49:00 PM AEST
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| Dang, makes a person blush. Leaves a person with thoughts... heh heh.... |
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Re: Mine
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by Aeicha on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 05:52:29 PM AEST
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very passionate
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Re: Mine
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 08:06:42 PM AEST
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Cute! I see where you're coming from. Nice job.
-Drapes |
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Re: Mine
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by JGB on
Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 01:41:53 AM AEST
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| This is how I met my husband. I worked for him and "ALL IN DUE TIME" it worked. I even moved out of the state before we connected the way we were meant to. |
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Re: Mine
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 07:46:23 AM AEST
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i really like this one.
each line makes you imagine every single word. I really understand where you are coming from with this one. i would give up everything for the guy i am with. he may of hurt me, but my love for him is as natural as breathing to me.
anyway good job with this one!
really enjoyed it and you have a natural talent for this!
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Re: Mine
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 07:06:40 AM AEST
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I love my bed too!
Seriously a very passionate well written piece.
J. |
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