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Daylight and Dark
Contributed by
American_Beauty_in_dixie
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Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 01:36:17 PM in AEST
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Daylight and Dark
Daylight and dark,
I bear the mark,
a mark of pain,
and a mark of hurt,
concealed by happiness,
and a sly little smirk.
Only I know what I feel,
Only I know whos inside,
Sometimes I, don't even know whos real,
I spend so much time,
trying to hide.
You see the bird in flight,
I see the SHark,
You see the Daylight,
although I, am trapped here in the dark.
Daisy Scott 1994
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Re: Daylight and Dark
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by Alina on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 06:19:55 PM AEST
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wow! i enjoyed this..although i think you left a lot of room for more...and this could be so much better if you put a little more effort! altogether though, KUDOS!
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Re: Daylight and Dark
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 10:28:18 AM AEST
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Perhaps sometimes you have to show the pain even though it will cause more hurt to do so.
Sorry for all your troubles, but pleased you could write about them
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Re: Daylight and Dark
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by American_Beauty_in_dixie on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 10:46:19 AM AEST
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| Thanks guys! I myself, thought maybe I should add to the original poem. However, I decided against this, because this was a poem I wrote when I was very young and naive, and I wanted to portray where I was mentally in 94. I am working on a new poem about the downward spiral I mentioned before. About all of drugs, and addictions, and where I am now, 12 years later. For me, I am hoping this site, can help me express the things, I have held inside for so long. Because even though I am sober now, I am very much still addicted. And I do not want to go back..soo more poetry to come, and please, I love the interaction, it makes me just want to post more.. |
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Re: Daylight and Dark
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 09:03:22 PM AEST
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Sad and really touching. I am glad things hae turned around for you...
Anxiously awating more from you...
Jenni |
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Re: Daylight and Dark
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by GurLG0nEWr0ng on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 02:45:25 PM AEST
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I understand all about being trapped in the dark. I went through a similar situation when I was younger. It's really hard to understand why these things happen, I always thought why share it with anyone, if I don't even understand this myself how could anyone else?
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Re: Daylight and Dark
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by ButchHoward on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 02:41:59 PM AEST
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Daisy, your poem reflects a sense of sorrow and entrapment that plagues so many kids. While the subject is upsetting, I like the way it was written -like a child who is lost in a cruel world. I'm glad you were able to write about it and that you are on the right path now.
Your friend in Savannah,
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Re: Daylight and Dark
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 03:25:12 PM AEST
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What a haunting write...Brilliantly told.
I'm so sorry you had to go through this, I pray that time has brought you healing.
Jeff |
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Re: Daylight and Dark
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 09:06:09 PM AEST
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Welcome to the daylight, Daisy! You'll soon find this site has friends overflowin' 'n' even a cowboy 'r two.
Readin' between the lines of this "young girl's" post, this is a heart wrenching place you came from. Congratulations for the 1994 insight to catch the moment of dark so that you could git t' 'n' see daylight. Welcome!
wabl
KenMoore
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