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I am
Contributed by
Archie
on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 09:06:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I am the deep well in the middle of the desert
full of wisdom for the weary traveler
I am the pages in a book being written
I am the undiscovered story
I am the ram who stands on the peak of the mountain
longing for one more adventure
I am the eagle soaring amidst the clouds
The falcon diving toward his prey
I am the old man filled with wisdom
and the young man who dreams
I am the gazzele who starts,
laughing at the dogs who chase
"You can't catch me"
I am the river cutting through the dry parch lands
and the first rains to fall in the desert after the dry season
I am the diamond in the heart of the earth
I am the resolution of the adventurer
climbing the mountain
I am the thirst of the man in the dry desert
and the strength of him who swims the ocean deep
I am bound in the flesh of a man
but my spirit soars high and free
My goal is the cup of water
that quenches the deep thirst
I seek more than knowledge
I long for more than expirience
I want more than fame or fortune
My goal is unattainable in a lifetime
but achieved at death
My eyes watch
My ears listen
My soul wants
. . . I am
Copyright ©
Archie
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2006-04-27 09:06:12]
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Re: I am
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by joydeep_nath on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 09:45:48 AM AEST
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| hm great write man wonder ...,must recommend you for the way the poem ends though u just might cut out a cuple of stanzas from the middle |
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Re: I am
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 09:50:53 AM AEST
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Fantastic write, fantastic insight, full of an awareness chock full of nature's stability through instability and a wiser man's admission of goals unattainable in a single lifetime of assigned mortality. Good choices of wisdom. I can read this man all day long! If the day has 40 or 50 hours to it. Thanks, Arch.
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Re: I am
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by freespirit on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 09:54:30 PM AEST
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Hi Archie
Once again poets here stand and clap well written the message is loud and clear
god bless and keep writing
your poet friend freespirt |
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Re: I am
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by Drapes on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 06:54:09 PM AEST
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Wow, beautiful! I really liked that! Nice imagery too!
-Drapes |
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Re: I am
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 01:00:55 PM AEST
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archie.. beautiful..
...You are a great poet who makes pen and paper so highly valuable.... you put those tools to great use.. much worth...
RL |
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Re: I am
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2014 @ 07:35:02 AM AEST
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Very cool poem, Archie. You must bne busy! lol.
Seriously, I like it quite much. You've encapsulated a......position of mine, in this har poem.
Best,
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Re: I am
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th December 2014 @ 05:04:29 PM AEST
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this is a Masterpiece! this is sooooo beautiful!!!!! i totally Love
Every Line! way to go archie, you have us all drooling with your talent!
i'm bookmarking this one! it's true perfection!
hugs n' love nessa
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