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Stolen Halo
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hippie
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Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 06:07:21 AM in AEST
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*****i got the insperation for this poem from the song Holy Water By Big and Rich*****
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Re: Stolen Halo
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by Archie on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 09:24:38 AM AEST
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| This poem is good. i like the style of this. It reminds me of a prayer that goes unanswered by god because the answer is maybe. |
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Re: Stolen Halo
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 01:36:56 PM AEST
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Artist: Big & Rich Lyrics
Song: Holy Water Lyrics
Somewhere there's a stolen halo
I use to watch her wear it well
Everything would shine wherever she would go
But looking at her now you'd never tell
Someone ran away with her innocence
A memory she can't get out of her head
I can only imagine what she's feeling
When she's praying
Kneeling at the edge of her bed
And she says take me away
And take me farther
Surround me now
And hold, hold, hold me like holy water
Holy water
She wants someone to call her angel
Someone to put the light back in her eyes
She's looking through the faces
The unfamiliar places
She needs someone to hear her when she crys
And she says take me away
And take me farther
Surround me now
And hold, hold, hold me like holy water
Holy water
She just needs a little help
To wash away the pain she's felt
She wants to feel the healing hands
Of someone who understands
And she says take me away
And take me farther
Surround me now
And hold, hold, hold me
And she says take me away
And take me farther
Surround me now
And hold, hold, hold me like holy water
Holy water
Looks like you got more than inspiration from this song (which I had to google). You've copied lines....that's illegal.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Stolen Halo
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by American_Beauty_in_dixie on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 01:51:51 PM AEST
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| I think you should try to be more creative, and brainstorm a little more for your own ideas. Your poem is just way too similar to the song, I could actually sing it while reading it. I hate to post negative comments, so I apologize in advance. |
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