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Revenge.
Contributed by
xpixiexdustx
on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 05:15:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Lying on the floor
Lights out, no sound
Same thoughts from before
Circling, round & round..
I can feel it coming on
Veins pumping Hate
It was her that was wrong
Time to seal her fate.
Don’t make me scream & shout!
Or that pretty blonde hair..
I’m gonna rip it all out!
Too bad, life isn’t fair
*****.
You’re gonna finally hear me out this time
You were supposed to be there for me
Love, unconditionally
But you refused to see, abused me
Used and accused me,
Unjust.
Disgust, in my eyes
Sick of all the lies
Shut Up!
I’ll blow your head off at the drop of a dime!
Disgusting, dirty whore
How could you..
I’m gonna beat you, sore
Black and blue
RED, ‘cause you’re dead
Blood spilled on the floor.
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xpixiexdustx
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2006-04-27 05:15:27]
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Re: Revenge.
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by Archie on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 09:28:44 AM AEST
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| I guess you don't feel like forgiving right now because the pain you feel is very deep. Life is tough when all there is is pain where there should be love and hope. I hope you will have a child one day and make up for what your mom did to you. |
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Re: Revenge.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 09:28:03 AM AEST
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work like this I always used to find hard to comment on...
but...
One thing I've said time and time again out of personal pain comes great poetry.
J. |
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