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This is a recollection of true events, experienced by me, bananasmoothie.
Contributed by
bananasmoothie
on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 02:44:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Whirrrrrrls ...
I don't know where to start.
Perhaps if you weren't
drinking me all the time
or spitting me when you're surprised
or slapped during jury duty
or mixing me with orange juice
or vodka
and whiskey sours
and finding yourself jealous of her dress,
I'd actually be able
to finish my
. . .
sentences. As it is.
Please. Plagiarize this masterpiece.
She was too drunk to remember,
so she still believes
she was the one
problem-drinking
me.
Copyright ©
bananasmoothie
... [
2006-04-27 02:44:29]
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Re: This is a recollection of true events, experienced by me, bananasmoothie.
(User Rating: 1 )
by bananasmoothie on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 03:21:28 AM AEST
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Hehehe ~ I voted my own poem a 5. I didn't know you could do that ...
There's gotta be something wrong with that ...
:D
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Re: This is a recollection of true events, experienced by me, bananasmoothie.
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 10:47:26 AM AEST
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this poem sounds like alot of rambling and nonsense to me real poetry makes the reader FEEL something.
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