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Here We Are Now, Entertain Us
Contributed by
outsider
on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Knuckles rapped upon the door
Heart already on the floor
Dreadlocks opens up the door
Have u seen her
Oh yes I've seen her.
Here we are now, entertain us.
So I stepped inside the den
They tried to make it seem so zen
Smoke so thick I could have got high then.
Nirvana blasting from the speakers
I feel stupid and contagious
Try upstairs dreadlocks smiles
Here we come now, entertain us.
Bass already thudding on my tortured brain
Each footstep upward driving me insane
Wishing this smoke would take me to a higher plane.
And so I push open the bedroom door
And there you are acting like a ***** whore
And my heart dies in agony and beats no more
Hello
Hello
Hello
How low.
Copyright ©
outsider
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2003-02-04 00:20:00]
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Re: Here We Are Now, Entertain Us
(User Rating: 1 )
by Lovingangel4u on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 05:03:53 AM AEST
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| Oh baby this is a very heart wrenching piece. Brings tears to my eyes that you had to experiance this betrayal, you deserve so much better. The poem is excellent. ILUVM |
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Re: Here We Are Now, Entertain Us
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 04:14:00 PM AEST
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| this is so good... i love it... |
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Re: Here We Are Now, Entertain Us
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by Icequeen on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 06:19:28 AM AEST
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| So beautiful, i love it, rhythm and rhyme are excellent, and it flowed well, altogether brilliant. |
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Re: Here We Are Now, Entertain Us
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:02:20 AM AEST
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| wow, i love this... brilliant |
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