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When you said goodbye, my eyes felt hot.....
Contributed by
ravisada
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Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 12:35:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Those school days, can not be forgotten our ways
We were just kids in our kinder garden school
Studying and playing together as innocent kids
You made me laugh and helped me in many ways
So, I felt someone there for me as a close friend
Days have gone and we have grown as teenagers
then my heart turned and felt love on you
But I don't know where to begin my love story on you
Anyhow, I wanted to tell you what was in my mind
Then I had come to know you had some one
I cried a silent tears because I could not help myself
I missed you because I did not propose my love on time
I will never forget our school days
Those days when you were everything to me
But now I realized that it was nothing but a dream
When you said goodbye my eyes felt hot
and my tears oozed from my heart.
But that's life and I have to accept it
Our good memories will be not erased from our hearts
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright @2006 Ravi Sathasivam
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ravisada
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2006-04-27 00:35:30]
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Re: When you said goodbye, my eyes felt hot.....
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Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 01:07:09 AM AEST
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Re: When you said goodbye, my eyes felt hot.....
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very, very nice, ty. Nice to be reading your poems again.
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