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She Is Me, As Much As I Wish That Wasn't True...
Contributed by
kelcey2007
on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 10:32:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You see that girl
standing in the corner
Surrounded by hundreds of people
but competely alone.
You see that smile on her face
the same one she has everyday
Many people probably don't even notice
but that smile is fake.
Why can't she accept the world
that is around her
Why does she always look past
what is standing in front of her?
Can anyone help this girl
who has lost all hope
Can anyone save this girl
before she hits a new low?
-me
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kelcey2007
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2006-04-26 22:32:18]
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Re: She Is Me, As Much As I Wish That Wasn't True...
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 11:00:51 PM AEST
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Sad but well written. I think we all feel this way at times.
hang tuff and remember joy cometh in the morning.
Keep writing.
huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: She Is Me, As Much As I Wish That Wasn't True...
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by American_Beauty_in_dixie on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 01:55:13 PM AEST
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| I Love your poem..I soo relate, I WAs and often still Am, that girl...Bravo! I'd love to see more. |
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