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Gone...
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 09:27:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You’re no longer here
You held me once
So close, so near...
So much for that...
All I want, all I need, all I long for,
Is the one thing you won’t allow me to have?
Do you, would you, will you, could you...
Love me? Miss me?
Fear me?.... why?
I... I am nothing...
Nothing without you
Empty...
Fill this void, this hole you create.
I live to love...
Without you...
I die.
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holderofthestone
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2006-04-26 21:27:22]
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Re: Gone...
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 11:12:38 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Gone...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 11:29:51 PM AEST
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| Know this feeling very well. I feel like that so much. Remeber when you first post this thought it was about somebody else but now i know that wasn't who it was about. Hope you have better luck than i did. Excellent poem |
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Re: Gone...
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by brew on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 08:00:33 AM AEST
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Wow, Chris...such emotions, put in a few words.! I hope someone can help you fill the void, and sense of loss you have. Liked the write, tho.
Brew~ |
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Re: Gone...
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by xPixiexDustx on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 05:48:27 PM AEST
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| Very sad, but I like the emotion. Great job. |
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Re: Gone...
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by Aeicha on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 06:01:45 PM AEST
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| very sad and emotional |
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Re: Gone...
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by MDodgen on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 11:06:18 AM AEST
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| great short, sad write. it says exactly what you were going for. fantastic job. |
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