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In The Rose Room
Contributed by
outsider
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Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 08:23:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I looked at you today
What could I say
You took my breath away.
You smiled at me so sweet
My heart skipped a beat
I confess you swept me off my feet.
You look fantastic is what I said,
You blushed, your face went red
I wanted to kiss you, I looked in awe instead.
I think you are an angel through and through
With a wonderful soul and beautiful too.
I am blessed that you love me and I love you.
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2002-07-27 08:23:52] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: In The Rose Room
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chrissie on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 08:28:30 AM AEST (User
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It's true that sometimes there are never enough words or maybe there are just too many.... this is simple and beautiful ...and says it all. Another lovely poem from you.
Chrissie x |
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Re: In The Rose Room
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 08:33:25 AM AEST (User
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Very beautiful poem, Outsider. Sometimes words can't express how we really feel.. Loved it..
Jenni |
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Re: In The Rose Room
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lovingangel4u on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 10:47:32 AM AEST (User
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I am lost for words myself except to say I love this poem and I love you. Always in my heart xxx |
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