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The Goodbye Of Goodbyes
Contributed by
o7neves
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Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 01:41:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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You came through, and looked real great
It's a damn shame, that we no longer date
You smelled so good, and held me real tight
At that point, I felt so light
I was in your arms, for such a short time
Yet it reminded me of when, you were all mine
You held me close, and kissed my neck
The minute you let go, I was such a wreck
How dare you do that to me, intentionally or not
Re-opened that wound, in that same exact spot
Don't ask me out, not even to lunch
Cuz your words have the effect, of some mighty punch
I can't do it, can't be your friend
Everything we shared, has met its end
I'm real sorry, but this is how it's gotta be
Because from now on, I gotta look out for me
I still do have, much love for you
But this is just, what I need to do
So take care of yourself, and have a great life
Don't worry bout me, I'll be quite alright!
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Re: The Goodbye Of Goodbyes
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 04:30:42 AM AEST
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Great writing.
I'm sure he'll be missed but someday the pain will subside.
keep writing and hang tuff.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Goodbye Of Goodbyes
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by onceandagain on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 07:20:57 AM AEST
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| Fresh open wounds, aah yes, they are the most painful. I feel your pain, and know where you are, I'm sorry. It's very hard to love and lose, but if you don't feel the pain of the loss, then I guess you really didn't love, did you? For it's the loss of the love that you mourn, and the bitter sweet memories that you have of that love will last a life time. Sometimes that's the worst part. Be strong, keep your head up, and the pen vertical, you have a gift, continue to use it to your advantage. Good job, nicely written. |
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Re: The Goodbye Of Goodbyes
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by CurtisC on
Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 09:35:59 PM AEST
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| I'm glad to hear it tanya, put this one in the past and move on with your own life, get it exactly to where you want it to be.....you deserve someone that will put you up on a petestal and realize what they get to be with......great write dear ;) |
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Re: The Goodbye Of Goodbyes
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by ---Alexis--- on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 05:19:08 PM AEST
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| Oh honey, i love it, its awsome, ...hurts to read, ive been there so many times |
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