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Past
Contributed by
jennm
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Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 01:07:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Stay awake, don't nod and dream
for dreams lead to images that transcend time,
a time during living that felt so sublime
But now looking back on the fruits of the past
one final bite, want the flavour to last
For its not like logic with a conscious choice,
its more than a feeling to hear your voice
Inclined to fall downward the reverse pastime spiral,
saliva the sweet infection; the sickness seems viral
Drawn to your aura i breathe you in
Features that pierce and puncture my heart
holes to be filled, yet further torn apart
Copyright ©
jennm
... [
2006-04-26 01:07:06]
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Re: Past
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by O7NeVeS on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 01:42:37 AM AEST
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| wow... great write!! Tanya |
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Re: Past
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by expired_promises on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 02:10:43 AM AEST
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wonderful poem
it has such a beautiful flow to it. i love the line "one final bite, want the flavour to last." isn't it true. and truth is beauty you know. you also end the poem on such a strong note.
one i will not soon forget. thank you. |
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Re: Past
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by Dizza_13 on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 03:12:48 AM AEST
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good stuff. great flow and ryhme. welcome to
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