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GIT ON DOWN
Contributed by
emystar
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Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 11:28:00 PM in AEST
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SultryRose's Signatures
Too many times luv ain't true
Just a place to hang yo hat.
Superficially you often pretend.
Don't stop here you dirty rat.
Hey now, wrangler if ya can't
luv with yo heart
Git on down, way on down the road.
Don't even bother to start.
Git on down, way down the road.
Deep inside real luv flows out
Understanding deep inside ya see?
Ya gotta forget selfish banter
Git out of yo self to be free.
Give much more than ya take
Let it flow from heart to soul.
Neva take luv for granted, hey!
Luv like there's no other, ya know?
Be steadfast, unmovable, neva sway.
Treat her like ya wonna be treated.
Let kindness, tenderness always rule.
Remind her that she'll 4 eva be needed.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2006-04-25 23:28:00]
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Re: GIT ON DOWN
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 01:09:15 AM AEST
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well well emystar to be honest I would need to hear this one played to music in order to make any further comment. :)
Be good, take care.
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Re: GIT ON DOWN
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 06:44:33 AM AEST
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You tell 'em, Grrlfriend...put out or get out!!
Hugs and Glad all is well...
Luv
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Re: GIT ON DOWN
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 01:19:09 PM AEST
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This is a great poem, and it has an awesome meaning.
Take care.
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Re: GIT ON DOWN
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by Packatack on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 03:52:44 AM AEST
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Hey cool poem its sounds good too, I play guitar so i can see it....thanks for sharing it
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Re: GIT ON DOWN
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 10:04:37 PM AEST
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Another realistic song. You're the best song writer I know.............who can we tell to publish these?
Hope someday to hear them all in music Emy.........they're good enough that's for sure!
Warm love,
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Re: GIT ON DOWN
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 09:07:29 PM AEST
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yea man don't be moochin.. lol.. home is where the heart is where ya hang your hat dude.. hey emy, that pic of that cowboy is very goodlooking lol... he does stand there looking as if he is too sexy for his body lol... oh my... lol.... am in a good mood today, forgive my comment, I could not resist typing this lol.. your poem is very great.. I love it..
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Re: GIT ON DOWN
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 12:52:00 AM AEST
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I thought the tittle conveyed a rhythumic feel yep i was right as i read it i could hear a nice country beat going along with this. ala " Gambler" by kenny rogers, u ought 2 record your songs great lyrics nice feel 2 it. well done emy.
((((emystar)))))
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