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Where Do They Go
Contributed by
maryetta
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Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 09:50:48 PM in AEST
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flying through my mind to see what is there
sweeping in and out of all the cobwebs i find
some are vague some are clear some just hide
stray thoughts ideas events all of my life
where do they come from where do they go
i try to make some sense of them i try to understand
they all seem to evade me at times playing games
always playing games with my mind to see who wins
sometimes i can be smarter then they are though
where do they come from where do they go
i see fragments floating freely there is a creative air
others are bogged down in mire struggling to be free
yet there are some who seem lost no where to go
here i had always considered myself a logical soul
where do they come from where do they go
the end analysis i suppose is how complicated i really am
im not a lost soul you see just a bit confused at times
but there are times i do have these rare random moments
when i feel maybe just maybe a genius floats around
where do they come from where do they go
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Re: Where Do They Go
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 10:02:11 PM AEST
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Hello friend,
good work. I think we all have our moments of wonder.
It's great to see you posting again.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Where Do They Go
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by Solo on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 10:31:46 PM AEST
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| ur poem was really good. I liked it a lot. |
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Re: Where Do They Go
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by PGreene on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 01:24:27 AM AEST
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| I really loved this poem. You did a great job. I was especially interested in the fantastic imagery you used to show ur mind. The word choice allows me to visualize this confused area where ideas come and go. I also liked your repeating line. at first i thought it was stupid, but after rereading the poem without the repeating line until the end, i felt that the line was necessary at the end of each stanza to tie it all together. All in all, a very good poem. i enjoyed it. |
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