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Depression
Contributed by
Panther
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Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 05:40:24 PM in AEST
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I am crying silently
I don't think it'll ever stop
I am drowning in confusion
That suffocates the thought
I want to die to end this pain
A pain I can't define
All I want is for it to go
But from it I can't hide
The pain is my companion
At times my only friend
All I want is for it to go
But who am I when it ends?
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Panther
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2006-04-25 17:40:24]
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Re: Depression
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by aegurly on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 08:13:04 PM AEST
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i loved it i feel the emotion!!!
read mine and comment!!!
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Re: Depression
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 10:09:50 PM AEST
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| well i think this is a terrific poem. i love your first stanza quite a bit. the suffocating the thought idea is very original. a good question to ask, also. for a very nice vauge answer, you are not who you were in the beginning or even the present =]. and you have to understand that when people say something they usually relate it to themselves or they are quite presumptious. and back to the poem...it is very easy to classify emotions as being what they arent, so i think its best to not get caught in the trap. perhaps depression will bring another friend along-hopefully happiness, but strength in numbers as they say... |
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