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It Was Lukewarm At First Sight
Contributed by
faiton
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Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 01:25:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It was lukewarm at first sight.
Who knows why I can’t say.
I just knew it wasn’t right.
Maybe a case of romantic decay.
Who knows why I can’t say.
Perhaps her interminable drone.
Maybe a case of romantic decay.
Perhaps because she was a crone.
Perhaps her interminable drone.
Her penchant for eating clams.
Perhaps because she was a crone.
That she weighed four hundred kilograms.
Her penchant for eating clams.
Her putrid, wheezy, phlegmy cough.
That she weighed four hundred kilograms.
These things put me off.
Her putrid, wheezy, phlegmy cough.
I just knew it wasn’t right.
These things put me off.
It was lukewarm at first sight.
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Re: It Was Lukewarm At First Sight
(User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 01:30:11 PM AEST
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| I understand you were trying to be funny but to me it was not ( I'm not overweight by much ) I just see making jokes at others expense as bad even if they are imaginery. As a poem the words went together well. 4 stars |
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Re: It Was Lukewarm At First Sight
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by Spike on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 05:57:35 AM AEST
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So, uhm...if you not going to use her number.........
This is so damn funny, I've now got that clammy, phlegmy cough. I bow to your ascerbic brilliance, whoever, you are mistuh f.
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