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This Boy
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 12:44:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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So there's this boy...he kind of caught my eye.
He makes me smile, and never makes me cry.
So different, from anything I've known.
As time's progressed, my feelings have grown.
He treats me like no other has, he treats me like I'm gold.
He warms my heart with fire, when it used to be so cold.
Because of him, I see the beauty in me i never thought I had.
He makes me be comfortable with who I am, when I used to feel so bad.
I'm waiting...waiting for this boy.
The one I believe when he says "I love you," the one who would never treat me like a toy.
Trying to take things slow, and the distance will help.
I owe this boy a debt of thanks, for this is the happiest I've ever felt.
He knows who he is, he knows how I feel.
I want to tell him, that I love him for real.
I don't want to push him, I'm afraid I'll push him away.
He had to go, and I cried for him to stay.
When you come back, boy, I'll be here waiting.
Waiting for you with my feelings unfading.
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MysticFireFairy
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2006-04-25 12:44:24]
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Re: This Boy
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 01:33:35 PM AEST
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| This is a good write. You described your relationship well and poetically. I hope things work out. |
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Re: This Boy
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by AmandaChartrand on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 04:33:05 PM AEST
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| This is an AmAZING POEM!!! the bast ive ever heard |
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Re: This Boy
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by kaitee on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 06:48:52 PM AEST
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i can relate..
Very good write
~Kaitee |
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