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All Along
Contributed by
poet_of_anger
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Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 08:27:20 AM in AEST
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Little boy what are you looking for
Little boy where are you going
Little boy what are you looking for
Do you know
Little boy there's no need to be alone
Would you like some company
Little boy why aren't your sorrows shown
Are you chasing your destiny
Little boy don't you know I love you
Little boy why won't you let me help
Little boy I have been where you are
Little boy I could help you cope
Little boy can't you hear me calling
Little boy I can't bear to see you hurt like this
Little boy what are you looking for
Do you know, do you know what it is
All along I've been searching for a home
Where there's no fighting and peace is shown
All along I've been searching for a place
Where all my past mistakes could be erased
All along I've been looking for a way
To fulfill my destiny some way
All along I've been searching for a home
All along I've been searching for a home
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Re: All Along
(User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 08:59:39 AM AEST
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The “poet of anger ” is full of compassion in this poem, I could sense the easy flow of rhymes in the stanzas. I pray that you shall find your peaceful and calm home very soon.
FRANCO
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Re: All Along
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 09:55:39 AM AEST
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"Do you know where you're going to?
Do you like the things that life is showing you?
Where are you going to?
Do you know?
Do you get what you're hoping for.
When you look behind you there's no open door.
What are you hoping for? Do you know?"
Just a quote from a song that I like to show you how familiar your song lyrics are.
When I read this I do not see it lining up with the title so for this reason i give it 4 stars. I like the consistency of your poem though. |
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Re: All Along
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 03:10:42 PM AEST
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| Now that i know the title is All Along I am quite happy to say this poem was an enjoyable read. |
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