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Droplets of blood everywhere
Contributed by
SlaveToTheUnknown
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Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 06:38:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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a cut here
a slash there
droplets of blood everywhere
on the floor
on the walls
on my shirt
and on my jeans
coming from my eyes
such sweet sorrow
such sour heart ache
such shattered dreams
sush bitter and sour lonliness
another cut here
another slash there
more droplets of blood everywhere
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Re: Droplets of blood everywhere
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 09:34:51 AM AEST
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It is a very painful poem, there is no such displeasure or frustration in this world that can’t be triumphed, hurting ones self is just a cowardly self-pitying human lot. My poet friend has penned it very cleverly (I believe).
FRANCO
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Re: Droplets of blood everywhere
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 10:31:23 AM AEST
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| There is an inward and an outward way that we show pain. This is your way of doing it. I wish you had another way a person you was close to to talk to. I hope you will come to have friends like the ones I have who have helped me to see that i do not need to hurt myself but that i can call them and talk to them about anything at any time. |
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