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Broken But Saved
Contributed by
redtears
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Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 08:43:03 PM in AEST
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Broken But Saved
As I lay here under the stars,
Where he left me all broken up inside.
I can feel the darkness closing in,
I can’t breathe, someone help me!
I was about to leave this place, perhaps forever,
But then you came to me as if in a dream.
I will never forget the way you appeared,
To free me from the darkness of my nightmares.
redtears
February 2006
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Re: Broken But Saved
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by aegurly on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 09:40:22 PM AEST
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hey i liked it!!!
hey check out my new poem "Do U Have A Clue"
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Re: Broken But Saved
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by sadaddy on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 10:19:38 PM AEST
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Well written, we all can be "broken but saved". Keep up the good work.
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