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Do You Care?
Contributed by
redtears
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Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 06:41:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Do You Care
If I died today,
Would anybody care?
The thoughts of suicide
Make it hard to breathe.
I hear a voice telling me,
Beckoning me towards death.
I can picture it,
From start to finish.
Choking down pills,
And being found dead,
Gone forever.
Would anybody care?
I feel invisible,
To the whole world.
A spec of dust,
Everybody brushes off.
I’m always crying,
But does anyone notice?
I’m all alone.
I turn to God,
But I can’t find Him.
I know He’s there
Reaching out to me,
But I can’t leave
My darkness and my fantasies.
In my fantasies people care about me,
But then I wake up to reality,
Realizing I’m nobody,
Nobody cares.
I’m heading farther in,
Towards the voices of death.
Does anyone care?
redtears
April 2006
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redtears
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Re: Do You Care?
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by aegurly on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 06:50:10 PM AEST
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i loved it i feel the emotion !!!!
read mine and comment!!!
pleeeeeeeeez!!!
aegulry!!! |
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Re: Do You Care?
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by beana on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 10:19:26 PM AEST
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| i know that feeling all to well. if there was a way that we were able to die just to see who all that we knew that would come to our funeral. to see if we truly had any friends or where we as lonly as we thought |
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