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LIES
Contributed by
Forgotten_soul
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Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 05:29:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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All my friends beleave
every single word I say
they all think I'm happy
and everythings ok
but in the truth these lies
have captivated pain
and it takes all that I can do
so I don't go insane
so far I haven't acted
on the thoughts inside my head
but I know it won't be long
beforeI wind up dead.
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2006-04-24 17:29:53]
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Re: LIES
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 02:45:34 PM AEST
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only too true. sounded like a shortened version like my 'untitled', the concept was the same at least. you said a lot in just a few lines, great write.
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Re: LIES
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by onceandagain on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 07:51:10 AM AEST
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| I hear in this poem a cry for help. You've taken the first step to your healing by realizing that you have a problem, and writing about it. It's not good to keep such things inside, and letting them out, is a healing step. I wish you much luck in your recovery. |
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