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Dangerous Porcelain
Contributed by
keilantra
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Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 05:27:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Porcelain and delicate
A fragile piece of glass
So beautiful wiht lonely eyes
You are mine at last.
Quiet and soft
What secrets do you keep?
Painful and dangerous
In darkness do you weep?
Flawless- but spiked wiht imperfections
So capable, ready to kill.
Mark your artistry upon my flesh
Cut into me your skill.
Complex in your simplicty
Too patient but too fast;
You run but you are near, i feel
This has not been our last.
Copyright ©
keilantra
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2006-04-24 17:27:22]
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Re: Dangerous Porcelain
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by wizard on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 06:20:12 PM AEST
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nice post...i enjoyed this...
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Re: Dangerous Porcelain
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 03:08:37 PM AEST
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In the abstract, flawless. In the personal, powerful.
In the complex, uninterpretable. In the end, one weeps.
I got two more of the works of this person to go 'fore I'm satisfied o' readin' another unbelieveable (is that how you spell that word?) poet/writer on YPDC.
My compliments.
wabl
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Re: Dangerous Porcelain
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 11:23:20 AM AEST
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You are definitely making a hell of an impact here. Once word gets around about you I can see you getting twenty to thirty times the reads, and anywhere from triple or quadruple the comments. You have an amazing gift. Here, you speak of porcelain (which is one of my favorite things to use in metaphors) but it is even more of a blessing to read someone else use it.
Porcelain - so frail, so alive, yet so dead, so beautiful in the palest of ways. While overall this poem is quite beyond simple excellency, the first and third stanzas are impeccable. Well done, you have found a fan in me. I will be looking for more.
BRAVO!
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