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Chaos
Contributed by
Icequeen
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Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
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Out of order, chaos came.
Right was wrong, loss was gain.
Great things accomplished were undone.
Great webs of power were unspun.
The high now low, the low were high.
The moon by day, the sun by dark.
Digging larks and rabbits flew.
Stars they fell and darkness reigned.
All was gone. All unmade.
When out of order, chaos came.
©2001 Amy Pluess
Copyright ©
Icequeen
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2003-02-03 17:00:00]
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Re: Chaos
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 03:34:18 PM AEST
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| this is so good... |
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Re: Chaos
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by Ash on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 01:02:18 PM AEST
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| Mmm...I love it. Very descriptive and it sparks my interest. flows very nicely as well. |
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Re: Chaos
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 08:58:55 AM AEST
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| an excellent write, "Digging larks and rabbits flew."...wow like a fantasy world, ohh love this poem! |
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Re: Chaos
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by poetic_tragedy on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 06:55:47 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem, dude, very well written. Two very enthusiastic thumbs up. |
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