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the suicide of the unwanted girl
Contributed by
Tiffyo4
on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 12:53:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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As i lay a wake at nite
i wonder how i'll die
and if i'll do it right
no one ever noticed i was there
i cut my wrist but no one cares
i sit and start to cry
no one was ever at my side
i just want to bleed to death
say my final words
take my final breath
so i take my pill and try to sleep
with you in the next room
with my secrets you keep
i'll never forget what you did to me
you broke my heart and now
hopefully you see
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Tiffyo4
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2006-04-24 12:53:07]
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Re: the suicide of the unwanted girl
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by jane666 on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 03:45:35 PM AEST
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hey,
i dont know who they are. but if it means anything to you, message me back and id love to hear. either way just remember that you are wanted by someone. maybe not the "you" that you speak of, but believe me, someone. even though i dont know you, strangly i seem to care. |
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Re: the suicide of the unwanted girl
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by ravendominique on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 08:46:29 PM AEST
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| As many times as I've felt suicidal and I recently took an od. I've learned there is always someone out there who wants you. |
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Re: the suicide of the unwanted girl
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by spyndl on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 12:54:15 PM AEST
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| a wise man once said self pity is a worthless emotion. Its easy to live in the dark, but much harder to live in the light. It will get better death is not the answer. |
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Re: the suicide of the unwanted girl
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 02:54:05 PM AEST
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| oh ya, cause killing yourself for attention or to prove a point "hopefully you see" really is a good idea. the writing was fine, just find something better to write about. |
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