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Moonlit Love Affair
Contributed by
brooken_22
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Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 09:27:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
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She climbs her second story window and down the thick tree trunk
She sprints through the woods, dodging protruding roots
The moonlight glows silver on the rippling lake
She strips off her clothes, down to her bathing suit
She cautiously descends into the chilly water
She dunks her head under and opens her hazel eyes
His dazzling scales glisten in the moonlight
The familiar face comes closer
Their lips embrace
She feels the pressure in her ears
She needs a fresh breath
She surfaces and gasps
He tugs playfully on her legs
She ducks under again
He teases her with his agility
Their parting must come
A kiss goodbye
He is gone…
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Re: Moonlit Love Affair
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 10:13:58 AM AEST
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A gripping way to capture the metaphor of honor in this poem. Never mind its dazzlin' scales glist'nin' in the moonlight, go with yer heart! Mighty fine intro of your work.
Welcome to YPDC. You'll fit in quite nicely. Bunch o' fine folks here and sounds like we just increased 'em. |
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Re: Moonlit Love Affair
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 11:16:23 AM AEST
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Marvelous imagination written in your lines. Beautiful command of words ifsjust fine!
I loved the whole poem as the crescendo builds..........wish he hadn't have left her though, such a beauteous setting, hope he comes back soon!
Wonderful romantic poem there.
Keep up the good work
Warm love
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